How the neorealism and neoliberalism assess the Israeli lobby in the USA? Critical analysis

The main criteria for ‘approving’ a research question are whether it
explicitly explores a problem within IR theory (as opposed to simply an empirical
issue in international politics) and if it provides scope for analytical reasoning. I have attached my last coursework and the feedback from my teacher. We can the opportunity to choice our own topics as long it is approved by teacher. So, there is no clear instructions to write this essay, but the most important to prove the analytical and critical thinking, and a well structure of the essay