Peer Review of initial posting (Topic: Supply Chain)

Read the initial posting of, and then provide thoughtful comments addressing the following:
Point out what you perceived to be the strengths of the initial posting along with supporting rationale.
Identify specific opportunities for improvement with regard to the content in the initial posting. Furthermore, you should provide supporting rationale for your stated position, as well as concrete suggestions and guidance intended to strengthen the effectiveness of the content.
Attached are:
1) The initial posting for one of my peer
2) Instruction for initial posting
3) PPT for the week