Proposal to build up with about 1400 words,possibly regarding methodology and literature review section.

Proposal to build up with about 1400 words,possibly regarding methodology and literature review section. Methodology to be written in past tense and should follow the structure( Research Philosophy, Research strategy, Research approach, research design, data collection, accessibility issues, reliability and validity, limitations, data analysis approach etc)Dissertation is based on secondary data research only. Improve literature review and clarify the objectives better, structure them in bullet points. Question regarding “capital of affect ” does not need to be look at, as I will edit it out. Findings and analysis / discussion have to display high level of CRITICAL analysis. Statistical data has to be supported by visuals created and not just copied from Internet
Be measurable in quantitative terms. Try to connect political system and foreign policy changes, foreign investments and what effects they have had on tourism dynamics, growth, market and people of Cuba, e.g self-employment employment. Feel free to narrow down the objectives scope and rewrite anything, as long as academic value is added . All together 6200 words of which around 1400 in the proposal and the rest of the words to be placed in the findings/analysis/disscussion and conclusion sections. Subtitles where needed. Data within last five years and no need to go into historical timeline of Cuban Tourism. Feel free to rewrite sections to upgrade the quality.