Review of literature except review of articles should have review of reports, policy documents, and government policies which are absent in your paper. Methodology is wrong.

Review of literature except review of articles should have review of reports, policy documents, and government policies which are absent in your paper. Methodology is wrong. The method is systematic literature review. Refocus methodology. Inclusion and exclusion criteria are wrong as it should revolve around choice of articles. Search strategy is missed. Key words and terms are missing. Databases are missing. Study sample, setting, design are wrong as they revolve around wrong methodology Study sample, setting, design are connected with the table of articles which should be added to systematic review and then analysed in the findings and discussion sections. Your table is missed. You need to select articles and then present them in the table and analyse. Add PRISMA. Articles in discussion should be analysed in relation to research questions. As soon as you change methodology you should change everything after it according to my recommendation and guidelines. Discussion lacks implication. References: your paper is connected with UK. There are references which are connected with the other countries. Please, check to use file as well